Messier Senshi Round 1 WIP

"I can't believe this!"she shouted with rage and pain. She couldn't believe that she hadn't noticed Cecily's plight and her descent into darkness. Why didn't she feel her seed becoming tainted? For all these powers she had, she wasn't strong enough to stop it from happening. 
"Cecily I'm sorry..." she croaked from her tight throat constricted with anger that she had failed her, and failed at her job.
"What's the point of having all these powers and not being able to save my sister!" she shouted at the ceiling. 
"If these powers aren't enough, if all my training isn't enough, then what is it going to take to save you!" she cried as tears finally welled up in her eyes. She wiped away at them, looking at her hands remembering she could do something to save her.
"I'm coming for you Cecily! You watch I can become stronger and I'll save you! I'm not losing anyone else tonight or ever, I'll go this alone, I can't risk anymore becoming tainted." she said as she lifted up her hand summoning a rune circle at her feet. She ripped off her skirt, sleeves, and sailor collar, before she started to float in midair. Her forearms began to glow than a bright flash of white, leaving behind armor. Her legs began to glow than a bright flash of white, leaving behind armor boots and thick white thigh high stockings. Her chest than flashes a bright white light leaving behind armor plating. Than seven white shimmering lights appeared around her in a circle, they than morphed into seven weapons circling around her. She reached her hand out and grabbed the nearest weapon.

"Come to me Scythe of Agnia, heed your master and fight!" she shouted as she grabbed it. She came back to the earth with a sight tap from her boots hitting the ground.  " I'm coming Cecily..just please hold on.." she thought as she began to run faster and faster, she wouldn't stop till she found and brought Cecily home. Damn this darkness to hell, I will destroy you with my bare hands , our Messier's light will forever shine!

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Okay well you guys I wanted to try something different and let me say I kinda of like it!^^ Comics aren't my strong point but I really wanted to push myself. As you guys know Kendra isn't your typical Messier. In her qualifier I explained how before she became a Messier she already knew Magic and uses it for combat.Remember her people love to fight and value people who can do it and do it well.  Here she is using magic to pull armor and weapons out of thin air, really she's pulling them out of her house. All of her armor is enchanted to make her stronger for when she is in combat. Her weapons do different things and have different powers, etc. So I can guess you can say she's forcing a power up of her fuku without going through the transformation. But her magic does eventually drain so it's kinda of difficult to determine how long it can last.

Well guys any advice so far?

I know it said to show our Messier in darkness but it's not in Kendra to give in to sadness, she would more than likely get angry and try to do something about it. She's not one to sit and cry, so I hope this doesn't disqualify me. If anything it's kinda of dark because she can kill herself if she uses too much magic?