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Harumis DreamScene: In a twisted version of wonderland we see a green clearing full of flowers, amidst the flowers we see a slumbering Harumi. A Foo dog walks up to her nudging her awake.Harumi: hmmmmm? Where am I?Harumi rubbed her eyes, and she stretched out her arms taking a look around her.Harumi: Well this sure isn’t grandmothers house or my room.She stands up dusting off her clothes which now resemble a Lolita inspired Alice with a twist. As she stands the Foo dog nudges her again and she finally looks down.Harumi: Oh!? I’m sorry I didn’t see you there! Well aren’t you a cutie! I don’t suppose you know how to get out of here do you?As she knelt down to pet him he ran off to a few feet away, stopped, turned to see if she was following him. She knelt there looking at him with a puzzled look, he turned around ran back towards and grabbed one of her braids and started tugging in the direction he was running in.Harumi: Ouch!!! Okay I got it! Fine will go your wa